@Something_beautiful You do not need to improve one bit! This is AMAZING and contains a beautiful message :D♥
There's this one word that's kinda been glued :P Everdate. Haaha, try spacing it out. I like this POV, it's unique. Keep it up.
This drew me in right away. This book led me through the range of emotions the main character was feeling. I like that about a book. x) Keep it up.
WOW. This is really amazing that someone has the guts to write somthing powerful like this. It sends a message to everyone.
I like the chapter! I'm gonna keep reading :) But everytime I click on chapter 2 it leads back to chapter 1. :s
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