you sign up for collage in a collage XD SORRY to correct you but yeah... good first 3 chapters though :3
I'm sorry but wow your story just instantly had mistakes that's just not good writing
You should consider taking more time to create a second version that flows more and is longer because I really think this has potential -0-
this would be really great if there wasn't a bunch of spelling errors and that it wasn't rushed I mean
i love this story ,its amazing ,full of detail, and dramatic I love it, I love it, I love it.>-<I love when she updates it, I read all the time .
my best friend is a great fan of jeff the killer and slender man! This is really kool!
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