You don't sign up for collage, i.e a piece of art made by sticking various different materials such as photographs and pieces of paper or fabric onto a backing.
you sign up for collage in a collage XD SORRY to correct you but yeah... good first 3 chapters though :3
I'm sorry but wow your story just instantly had mistakes that's just not good writing
You should consider taking more time to create a second version that flows more and is longer because I really think this has potential -0-
this would be really great if there wasn't a bunch of spelling errors and that it wasn't rushed I mean
"Her face /was/ sweaty, hands /clammy/, /and/ /she/ /was/ scared half to death."
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