7 Deadly Sins - The Lost Banished Heir
The Seven Deadly Sins have awoken and are now in search of “The Lost Banished Heir”, Cain who would be the key to their ascension to power. Cain’s reincarnation a 19 year old boy who on his 20th birthday would become the most wanted human among these 7 Demons. Will the sins claim his immortal soul or will he over come the darkness and temptation of each sin and rise with new found virtues.
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MichaelJScinto
In your second paragraph when you say 'glancing around bored', it should either be 'glancing nd, bored, ' or use an adverb instead.
Oooooo. This prologue sounds very intriguing. I can't wait to read more! And yeah, you had the perfect amount of detail but also very mysterious. :) -Boo
First thoughts I got when I read this is that I like that Lucifer is a female. The originality of the story is very intriguing.
I like the twist with Lucifer being female. I can't help but wonder if this is a permanent form or a reincarnation.
This was written wuite well, though I'm wondering why the dialogue is in italics. Anyways, the description was subtle but it was worked fine. (:
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| Name | LyriX |
| Location | Jamaica |
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