7 Deadly Sins - The Lost Banished Heir

12 Part Story 12.8K Reads 381 Votes
LyriX By Tri3LyriX Updated 3 years ago
The Seven Deadly Sins have awoken and are now in search of “The Lost Banished Heir”, Cain who would be the key to their ascension to power. Cain’s reincarnation a 19 year old boy who on his 20th birthday would become the most wanted human among these 7 Demons.  Will the sins claim his immortal soul or will he over come the darkness and temptation of each sin and rise with new found virtues.
Very very good prologue, and intriguing concept that I look forward to reading. The writing style is clear and easy to read as well.
This is very alluring and interesting! Makes you want to read more, great job :D
the prologue lures the reader in sounds like an interesting read well done :)
In your second paragraph when you say 'glancing around bored', it should either be 'glancing nd, bored, ' or use an adverb instead.
Oooooo. This prologue sounds very intriguing. I can't wait to read more! And yeah, you had the perfect amount of detail but also  very mysterious. :)
                                    -Boo
this was really short, but I liked it! I really like that Lucifer is a female, that's awesome! Amazing story! And i love how you reeled me in from the beginning and how this was so easy to imagine! This held my attention all the way through and I have to say great job!