I enjoyed reading this! Although I have to agree on the use of words better suitesd for the era... But overall, well done! ;)
Good story but the English is way too modern, "sexy"?!?!? Most of all poor writing... Couldn't go on reading.
This story is really wonderful! Every part of the story is interesting and important!
I absolutely loved this story! I felt anger, joy and sadness throughout. Keep them coming :0)
This is amazing please upload as soon as possible! As cruel as it sounds I hope Lady Louisa falls off a horse and dies and they can have a happily ever after!!
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