youre good at the visuals, try to drag it out a little more, and itll be perfect. ;)
You should do other stories and continue with the last one as a full story I really liked it!!
I like the total different steamy secret story it makes it so mysterious and dam hot
Hi I'm Rachel I love what u did what ur story I want ur number and what was ur inspiration on writing a story with alot of steamy content
dat wuz amazing!!!! plz write more. more.more. n more. I juz cant get enough!!!;)
You should write one where its a brother and sister and they love each other so they just do it :) or one where they use a sex swing :)
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