Trust me! You have got the detail down! But hey it's awesome :) keep it up!!! -Lissy <3
Whoa. Amazing detail, captivated me the whole way through. Keep going with this, and update soon :)
Wow-
Absolutely terrifying and gruesome... I was sitting on edge!
It is an interesting concept and left me hanging I can't wait for more!
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Love, love, love it! Great job! I'm looking forward for the rest of the story! :D
I'm a little confused. Why does Travis see the monster... Good story so far and I agree with everyone with the verb tenses. voted :)
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