This is not really my kind of thing. To me it's a little creepy, but you are very descriptive. Good job with that.
Trust me! You have got the detail down! But hey it's awesome :) keep it up!!!
Whoa. Amazing detail, captivated me the whole way through. Keep going with this, and update soon :)
Absolutely terrifying and gruesome... I was sitting on edge!
It is an interesting concept and left me hanging I can't wait for more!
Love, love, love it! Great job! I'm looking forward for the rest of the story! :D
I'm a little confused. Why does Travis see the monster...
Good story so far and I agree with everyone with the verb tenses.
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