DID HE KNOW HOW THIRSTY I WAS? that gav me a heart attack! nice! i love how her family come after her i the plot. cool
the description is well done. i lyk both vampires! ^.^ lol I LUV VAMPIRES! *voted
This is a really good start :) your descriptions are done well :) and i'm going to read on now :) voted! :D
This is pretty interesting and it has a bit more detail than the other story I read of yours. I like the idea :)
This is really good, I like it! You have a very interesting way of writing. And when I say that, I mean it as a good thing. Nice job on this, keep it up.(:
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