Very well written and thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it. You have unique style of writting and it sets you apart from the masses.
Aww. So touching! It's the reality. It's what's really happening in the world. I just wish I knew what happened to Lauren.. But this is a good one.
This is such a great short story! It was short yet very powerful. Unloved the moral to it.
This makes me think of all the times that I rode on the subway without really 'looking' around. Hmm. Kind of deep. Cool.
You may like this video, your story reminded me of it :)
I apreaciatte (sorry for wrong spelling xD) the way you notice 'this' environment. I love your details,good job.. :D
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