Her Death, His Love

He watched as the haunted light in her eyes dimmed. He stood there helpless as he watched her delicate body fall. He watched as the rosiness in her face was stolen. She was there one day gone the next. He watched as the crimson stained her clothes, tainting her purity. He watched as her knees hit the ground in a deafening bang. He watched as he faltered forward drowning in her pool of blood. The wind oozed from northward. It surpassed him but he was stuck. He was stuck in the past and he heard her voice calling. He stretched for her but all he clutched was the empty air. He never meant for this to happen. He never meant for the one he loved to die all because of him. ( Slow Updates due to school. Sorry) ( Sorry for the mistakes but it is being edited) Editing done by: http://www.wattpad.com/user/InezMonsterBunny Trailer was also done by her.
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Wow, really dark and intriguing about how she lost her life! Great descriptions and flow Andy :) I'm going to keep reading for sure.
Thanks for the dedication! <3 I haven't been able to get here often but im sooo reading it
@CupidA Good luck on exams! :) There really difficult...

I just posted it its called read cupid... lol but i need help with a title
@CupidA i mean idk really know if that would he helpful i never got that though..

would you like to read a new story of mine real quick?
I read the first couple sentneces and noticed you went from first person to third person POV, well I know nothing abut this stuff but can you do that? :/
well maybe but i can barely edited my own work :( lol i will and your very welcome, again... :p


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