Ooh! I'm actually gonna read on in this one. Super intriguing and fascinating; drew me in right away. Great job :D
whaat an interesting begining! ill make sure to check out the rest. annnd i like your word choise and grammer and all that good stuff. keep writing(:
I thought this was a very good prologue. It was nicely written and you have good grammar as well as just the right amount of details :) Bravo!
@the_hooded_girl you're welcome. yeah, just let it flow when you are writing it :)
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