I thought your flashbacks were fantastic. Very well toned and emotionally charged (which can be very hard to do!). Nice work!! You got my vote! W.
I loved the first 9 paragraphs; they were simply amazing. You write so well, you sound so professional like! I love this! Voted :)
It was very interesting and emotional. Your descriptions are amazing, I could visualize the scenes and flash backs were neat! Great job!
omg, loving this opening! it caught my attention straight away and kept my attention through out.
Emotional... I personally think murdering is going too far ; u ; But good story, nonetheless xDD
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| Name | Simone |
| Location | Brilliantly British |
| Member Since | Mar 03, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 2,161 |