That was sad and the message made me understand more the author is talented and I feel bad for her
After reading the author's note, wow. So talented, the way the story is a metaphor, and lets us interpret it each in a different way.
Very well written and good way to use a dream for an internet metaphor. I look forward to reading your other works.
This is an excellent short story and really helps your readers learn life lessons. :)
This is amazing. I feel really bad for you, after reading the authors note. I voted =)
Its really very good. It's written well and well described. There were a few spelling mistakes but that's easily corrected. Good work, voted! :)
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