umm how is he her mate when she's a vampire? is she still part wolf too.... i am so confused!
the story is good, but can u possibly not put as much spacing between paragraphs??
I like the story, but the grammar and spelling mistakes are very distracting. You may want to consider editing more or asking someone to edit for you.
Ooooh I already love this! :D And I want her to kick the chicks ass for doing that! :D
Cool story! Suggestion: Don't put so many spaces in between the lines, I keep on thinking it's the end of the chapter...
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