The prologue is great! The names you've given are pretty amazing too! I like Myaengaer. It sounds different haven't heard it yet.(:
I voted and wow I am rather flabbergasted with this and this just the prologue! I was thinking that you may want to think of publishing such exquisite book!
Love the prologue! It's very ominous. Ps sorry I've been absent lately. I'm trying to get caught up.
good start, it gives a lot of background and setup for the story that is to come. . a little editing and its perfect !!!
This was an interesting prologue. I like how you roped in history to make it seem a bit more relistic and mysterious. Great work!
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