Torn (Zayn Malik Fanfiction) *EDITING*

35 Part Story 25.2K Reads 523 Votes
LittleBlackStar99 By LittleBlackStar99 Updated 2 months ago
Heather, bullied by 5 guys, yep you've guessed right.

Harry, Louis, Liam, Niall, Zayn.

Pretty cliche story may I add...

Harry is the leader of this group. But he doesn't really hate Heather.

The other boys just float around after him, except, Zayn Malik. He isn't any better then the other four boys but maybe he can be.

Authors Note: I was a carrot when I wrote this, currently editing


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Mute_In_Speech Mute_In_Speech 2 years ago
I really don't understand why she would love people that obviously hurt her?? She's weird but it's intriuging.
BlueeIsBae BlueeIsBae 2 years ago
This is my 3rd time reading this story and: ts very interesting
maxelis maxelis 2 years ago
@MakkRocker hey Makkrocker it's me PurpleLOVER!! I got a Wattpad ;) could u check out my story u don't long on anymore :(
BookWormAnna BookWormAnna 2 years ago
@MakkRocker This sounds very good! I trust that maybe you will make it more of your own though as the bullying theme can be cliche at times. And your sentences are quite long, I had that problem aswell when I started writing. This is overall very good, keep up the good job. Voted!:)