Is it not a teenager saying it? It should sound like a real person is saying it, bot a robot.
I'm not trying to sound mean in anyway, and I myself do hate cap locks too, but I know some authors (including the wonderful J. K Rowling) that use cap locks
That's what I was thinking. Cause from the way that was worded, even without the likes it sounded kind of teenagerish.
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