This is so sad! I know how she feels and it suck when you don't have someone there to hold you :(
Wonderfuly writen but so very very sad. Great job you conveyed the ideas and emotions in the story very well. Keep writing:)
Wow. Just, wow. That's the only way I can think of to describe this. It was completely amazing and well written.
Wow. You should write how Derek and everyone takes it, then leave it there.... Write it in the same 3rd person omniscient.
Wow, this had such strong emotion conveyed in just one chapter! It was beautiful. You bring your words to life, and write in such a great way. I loved this. xx
Wow. Such a great story! I can feel the strong emotion in all the words. I feel like it's real and I'm living it :) Beautiful --voting--
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