I didn't really like the ending, I'm sorry, but I really really liked the beginning. I want a golden retriever too! D:
Wow, I like this! Great idea, and no, it's not like one of those repetitive stories we were talking about at all!
woah. haha. t was really good! a couple grammar/spelling errors, but overall it was intriguing! kept me reading! haha voted :D
Hey, this is nice :) your plot is your own and it's written well. Only problem, it's a bit short.. Other than that, it's great. Keep up the good work :)
I'm quite curious of what you are going to do with this.. the beginning is a bit confusing but throughly its really good :D
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