I needed a break from E.V.I.L. and this is a short story I came up with one night. For some reason when I was younger I was afraid of the machine voice that picks up telling you the number was disconnected so I worked with that. This is also my first story ever to be told from female perspective. It's also set in the past (mid 90s). I thought about submitting this to TheCreepyHomeboys but I am happy with the story I have with them. Though they might like this one more. I would like to dedicate this to them, all of them. Thanks to aTouchOfClass for the cover.
Wow. Scary stuff, monotone voices. Great job with causing fear, it was indeed quote frightening. Although logically the plot makes little sense, it's good for scream-your-head-off horror.
@Kakarot89  I didn't think it was THAT much of horror (((: But, shame on me haha I still play my GameBoy Advance xD
I don't think I will every hear the disconected phone recording the same way ever again, next time I'm hanging up before it can finish talking....
By the way, I like the cover but I think the cover should be a little more creepier, But that's just my opinion, Thought I'd share that with you :)
Gosh, I would have been freaked out as soon as I heard the person speaking on the phone and then if I saw that...ew. Rather gory I must say. An effective short story - well done and voted! :)
As I said before, great work bro =D
                                    
                                    Well earned vote for giving me the chills.