This is good so far, except you could maybe add a little more detail here and there. Other than that, I like it very much~!
I've really enjoyed the story so far and will definitely look it up on Amazon or Smashwords when it's published! :)
its not typical the plot is attention grabbing from the frist chapter i also like the characters. all in all so far its intresting. by the way love the cover
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| Name | Kate Bloomfield |
| Location | Sydney, New South Wales, Australia |
| Birthday | Jun 11 |
| Member Since | Jul 17, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 299 |