i never thought of puyallup as bigger then centralia... well maybe if you ass south hill, and everything between sumner and orting
Beautiful start, really sweet start, I hope it carries on this way! - I also really love your cast!
Great start, its interesting and well written. you have desribed it really well. voted :)
Great chapter, I love the description and details you use it really puts me into the story. Overall great job with this and I didn't find any mistakes !
I love how this is in book format, it makes it look cool :) Love the story, love the impending drama!
I really like the beginning! The part where Nicola's dad left her mom was really sad, but extremely well-written. Good start!
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