That girl should really notice him... I love it. It's really sweet, romantic, and sad :(
this one was awsome bro....
feel like you have put all the pain in my heart in your work....
Your a really good writer, especially about love and heartache. And from all the comments you get I am sure you not a nobody :D
This is the sweetest thing I have ever heard!!! Its just sad that the person you're in love with, ignores you... </3 :'(
Beautifully written! The power of emotions in every word was relatable and I can't stop reading until the last line..
That is so romantic...the girl should like him... Anyway, very nicely written!!:D
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