All I Want is You

40 Part Story 662K Reads 4.8K Votes
Sally By Inahan86 Completed
Past experience has thought her to be stronger and dependent. She has worked hard to ensure she has a better life so that she will not be humiliated and insulted by the rich again. However, after meeting with Leo Hendricks again 8 years later her world began turning upside down. Could Luna ever resist what her heart actually wants?
    She has broken his heart and betrayed his love in the past but even though 8 years has passed he’s still unable to forget her. He came back to her life in attempt to revenge for what she had done to him. But can Leo ever resist what his heart wanted?
    This is a story about Love between two degrees... Love story between rich guy and poor girl... How their differences have come between them making them fall apart... They meet again 8 years later and they both are successful and famous but the old wound still not fully healed. Will they be able to forgive and forget and follow what their hearts desire?
i'm pretty sure your books will be more popular and stuff if you edit a little. such as your grammar mistakes and stuff. people might be irritated reading your books and there are too many english errors
@YeniferSalguero you too? glad to see someone agree with me! i like to see first pov a lot!! with a switch between the guy and the girl!
@RomanticPanda.  Yea. Third point kinda confuses me a little.
aww love the story so far, but sadly i don't like it in the third omniscient pov :(
More work on the technical side of writing. Check your idioms and stick to one tense.
My favorite story! It's so nice! I finished reading it on one day only. :)