The first guy i was in love with said something similar. He said: "How did you ever get the idea that i would ever like someone like you?" That fucking hurts.
Couple of grammatic errors but whatever... your story was funny and your writing style confident, good job :)
Grammar errors are your main problem, fix that and you'll be good! Not exactly my kind of plot, I'll admit, however. . .
GREATEST BOOK EVER! Im not lying either this chapter is awesome can't wait to read more
Awesome. Some punctuation errors here and there though. But I like how the story's developing.
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