I think I have read this before! but anyway this was really good! saw no mistakes, well written, and you had me hooked from the start.
@SoyukiProduction Mwahwahwa! U said scene instead of sense just now! Once again, I win! Mwahwahwa! XD
@SoyukiProduction then why did u write "mistake" instead of "mistakes" just now? hehe! :P gotcha!
This is the first story I've read like this. And it's actually pretty good. =P A few little errors, but I'm sure you can fix it. It's a good start.
@SoyukiProduction Welcome. I know I am ;) remember to read/comment/vote on mine :D x
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| Name | Norika <3 |
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