losing kale (watty awards 2012 please read)

Kale lied across the ice motionless. Skaters rushed off the ice as paramedics scurried across trying not to slip. Carefully they lifted her onto a stretcher and carried her off the ice.
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How did you take such a short story and make me wanna cry? That was great! I'm glad @GavinHudson had me read this. It was great. Really.
This is soo great and understandable I'm a skater too it made me cry it's soo good!!<3
@skatergirl2011 How was she put in a coma :( Oh i forgot to say this story was really good XD
The ending was so ..... I don't know how to word it. That was meant as a compliment. Great job!


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