Remembering Smiles

31 Part Story 85K Reads 1.1K Votes
Whatever the hell you want it to be! By InYourPants Completed
Layla felt like she almost had her life back. After her father left without warning, things were pretty hard, but now things were looking better. However, one drunk driver changed that. All, she felt was a bang to the head, and now her memory of everything perfect, was gone. She had to start over, and even with the support of the ones she thinks she loves, she realized how difficult things really are.
Great concept, very well written, but a lot of grammar and spelling errors. I loved your story, but I think you should go back and proof read a bit. I just wish there was more.
thks for writing this AWESOME book! I <3 it so much! pls pls pls write a sequel? 
                                    
                                    - Your fan XD
i was interested when i read the blurb but the detailing of of her every movement was not necessary imo.
ilike your cast! ;o they loook good, and they all kinda fit the characters! :) 
                                    i like the chapter - i love how in the first sentence you used good detail to explain and descibe things. (:
Niceee !! Loved the sudden turn !! kept me focused through out , nice job, will definetly reading on ! =]
                                     and I'd really appreciate it if you could read my story, 
                                    please comment, vote and even fan if you like it , 
                                    http://www.wattpad.com/2002482-mystery-unsolved
                                    Thank Youuuu =]
Allen hahah(: I <3 him!
                                    Kay, i love the plot!
                                    Keep it going!
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