i was interested when i read the blurb but the detailing of of her every movement was not necessary imo.
I like the turns in the plot and how I cant predict what will happen! also love allen!
oohhh...this sound exciting and cool! very good job for an introduction! sorry, i am unable to read your next chapter now...i may look at it later though. :)
Excellent introduction. I like the way you detailed your things and fixed your spelling, i'm totally hooked! I'm voting and becoming a fan :D
Nooooooooo! I get the feeling she's gonna forget Allen! and if she does I hope there is no love triangle!! *whines childishly*
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