Watch out for our verb tenses. Those can be tricky. ^_^ If you are telling something that already happened, stay in the past tense.
Wow. That's really good. For a second i didn't realise what hit me. You're building up a very nice suspense! :)
I've read Before I Fall by Lauren Oliver, but what I've read so far sounds great! Keep writing girl! :)
just saw the summary...exact reaction: O____O HAVE TO READ THIS uddukdycnsidynsowdndisisd CLICK added to library.. :3 Can't wait to read this!! ^3^
it's a little short. Maybe add more for this chapter. But it's smooth and great. I like this. :D
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| Name | Daniela |
| Location | Where people say "ya'll" and wear cowboy boots ;3 |
| Birthday | Mar 03 |
| Member Since | Jul 06, 2011 |
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