The Sweetest Sorrows of Ava Hale

24 Part Story 134K Reads 4.8K Votes
Kara_writes By Kara_writes Updated 8 months ago
[Sourcebooks Story Development Prize Winner!]

Lies, secrets, one deadly truth.

After sixteen-year-old Ava Hale’s older sister is murdered, she must shed her outer layers of vulnerability and find the killer — even if it means befriending people with secrets of their own. When her sister’s former best friend, Rafe Lawrence, appears back in town only months after her murder, carrying evidence suggesting he was in town the day the incident occurred, Ava’s instincts kick in, and she’s immediately suspicious of his motives.

But Rafe isn’t the only one harbouring dangerous secrets. Ava begins to lose hope in her sister after discovering she was part of her town’s infamous girl gang. Shattering not only Ava’s idealistic views of her sister, but her trust too, she wonders if she should bother at all. Feeling compelled to push her personal feelings aside, Ava is determined find the killer before they strike again.

Teaming up with her sister’s former best friend and a group of girls who’d rather have nothing to do with her, Ava is on a mission to find this killer before someone else she loves gets hurt. In a letter addressed to her sister, Ava pieces together the evidence that led to her murder, realizing much too late that the murderer is closer than she thinks.

[Labelled PG-13 for mild swearing]
Fantasy_girl21 Fantasy_girl21 14 days ago
So good already! I literally only saw two errors, and it was simple word repetition in a sentence. Great start
Vidsammy Vidsammy 3 months ago
Brilliant Introduction of the story!

Love the exposition of the characters' personality and plot diagram.
strwberryhemmo strwberryhemmo 4 months ago
I love how you write, really nice chapter!

When Lia said she ran into someone at the Cafe, I thought she literally ran someone over with her car, oops?
anonymouswriter1213 anonymouswriter1213 4 months ago
This beginning is very intriguing and gives a great background into the story. I enjoy the voice of Ava, and how she slowly realizes that this could help. Nice job.
awwthentic awwthentic 4 months ago
Perfectly crafted start. I like the concept of starting with a quote that matches the storyline. I had been doing the same with mine. But talking about your story, it looks interesting. I like your writing style a lot. :)
snowyred snowyred 5 months ago
This is such an interesting idea, it's the only book on Wattpad that I've come back to and read more than once. I love the idea of narrating it through a letter- it just seems like the RIGHT way to do it. Perfect.