5 Part Story 1K Reads 45 Votes
scrivener19 By scrivener19 Updated 2 years ago
Cynthia Becker is strong-minded woman that refuses to back down under any circumstances. 
She is a journalist by profession and is a self-confessed adrenaline junkie. As a journalist, she uncovers a shocking story about Neil, a Senators son. She doesnt know what to do next? Should she expose the story or use it to her advantage? 
In the mean time, Neil figures out that she is after him and sends people to keep her under control.
HopeJohn HopeJohn 3 years ago
I did not think your Chapter was short by any means. Sometimes for people with short attention spans. *coughs embarrased* Its always good to keep it short and simple, in my book the longest chapter is 3 pages.
MunchieMonster MunchieMonster 3 years ago
Not my favourite genres, but this was written pretty well and I enjoyed reading it...
XxTiCkLe-xX XxTiCkLe-xX 3 years ago
I think this is a great start to the story. Answering you question at the end, yes it was short but as it was the introduction it was fine :) Love it !! *voted*
SMILEY99552 SMILEY99552 3 years ago
I think that was a great start and I enjoyed reading in a lot! Off to read the next chapter now!
tlm2338 tlm2338 3 years ago
I love investigative journalism stories!!! You started out really strong!  Your main character is really likable and relatable.  Reading on!
faithinmystomach faithinmystomach 3 years ago
I love the song in the beginning xD I like it already and am going to go read more [; Fanning, Voting, and all that jazz<33