Alpha's Possessive Mate !

16 Part Story 43.6K Reads 604 Votes
ProudMomme By ProudMomme Updated 14 days ago
!!!!!!!!WARNING!!!!!!!! This Book Is Rated R. It Has Strong Sexual Content. 18 Yrs And Older Only Please.
CandiceH27 CandiceH27 2 months ago
Nice first chapter... Really draws u in.. I feel emotional connected to the characters already
Luv-U123 Luv-U123 5 months ago
ur dad cheated.... -.- whats so confusing about that? u just heard it... Im pretty sure ur smart and old enough to put the puzzle pieces together.... -.-
Luv-U123 Luv-U123 5 months ago
Sorry too late... forgetted happened.......... *is that even a word?!?* Who are u again?
teardropsriver teardropsriver 8 months ago
The story is interesting. I'll follow and read it. 

My first advice would be to make the paragraphs a bit smaller, it would be easyer to read and separate the dialogue. You have two people speaking in the same paragraph and that is confusing for the readers.
Rose_Hawthorn Rose_Hawthorn 2 years ago
hey please update and get to the rated R stuff quickly lol!!!
prity_sha prity_sha 2 years ago
I think u should start the next chapter with rose telling harmony what happened thus giving more insight into rose's feelings. I cnt wait to see the direction that this will take, there are so many possibilities