this story is nice :) is Brandon really a real Cupid.?? I wanna know about him more
@MunazzaBangash I think it was SYS forum in teen fiction or humor club. I don't really remember the club but it was worth finding it :)
It's a great start to begin things directly to the point and this story was fun to read just polish a little more and it'll be flawless :D
I really like the idea of the story, but there are a few mistakes. All in all, it's a really great story. Keep up the good work! :)
I loved this chapter. I love how you made the dialogue flow. The opening was great, and you only have a few minor mistakes. Xx
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