Niam OneShot (fluffy/smut) :3

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sonicXdii By sonicXdii Updated 2 years ago
-edited- another casual interview, asking about girlfriends! Getting jealous!! No need to tell urge story! But what happens when Ni confronts LiLi about he's cheating? With his ex- out of all people !!  HOT SMUT (or I've been told x3)
OH MY GOD I WAS IN THE CAR WITH MY MOM AND I JUST BURST OUT LAUGHING AND SHE WAS LIKE AND I QUOTE: 
                                    "ARE YOU READING ABOUT BOYS FRICK FRACKLING AGAIN"
                                    AHAHHAHAHAHAHA
That was really good for your first time writing smut you lost your FANFIC VIRGENITY I think I spelled that incorrectly
I'm British, so i do know that...  I'm saying you should change it to say "In England " Instead of "In British" ....
Plus you still have a lot of mistakes. Not trying to be rude just saying
"In british" is gramtically incorrect. British slag, sure. But in England they speak proper english. Theres no such thing as the language "British."
Oh my gosh, this was so amazing! It's way better then any of mine! ^__^