The Girl That Was Buried In Her Ball Gown

17 Part Story 3.9K Reads 142 Votes
dotandtittle By dotandtittle Updated 13 days ago
How could one evening at the junior high school ball turn into something completely unexpected.  When something goes terribly wrong, what will happen to a young girl who's world has been turned upside down?  Who can she turn to, who can she trust?  What is it with these others that are trying to impersonate her and leading her to some place she does not want to go.
BekahEva BekahEva 3 months ago
This, in some ways reminds me of my thirteen year old self. 

You are such a professional writer and really have captured the essence of a young teenager. It is really wonderful to behold. Very well done!
Free__Palestine Free__Palestine a year ago
I love the descriptive techniques- 'menacing roar'. This is so sophisticated :)
Carnessa Carnessa a year ago
Very well written. I like how you've conveyed her feelings perfectly through words :) I'm liking the usage of Maori words also. I'll definitely read some more
CoffeeNcigarettes CoffeeNcigarettes a year ago
Great first chapter! The length was perfect, it wasn't too long or too short. Your description fit very nicely, and i got a great look at the MC. Wonderful!
FayeMassey FayeMassey a year ago
first chapters really good. i'll have to read the rest later as i have to get off. sorry i havent read it till now. :)
therapyluke therapyluke 2 years ago
@dotandtittle Woah, thank you so much!! That means a million! You're a seriously talented writer yourself,and I'm surprised you don't have multiple books published.