they were quite unconventional fictional couple.personality wise.maybe i felt like this due to how u painted aaron's character. great introduction. voted!
I like this start, I want to keep reading. Well told with very little in the way of errors.
This was super good and you've got a decent length and structured, and set the scene really well! :D *voted*
Love, love, LOVE THIS! I'm usually not into these kind of stories, but you've began to interest me. I'm adding this to my library :D
I absolutely love this! I don't know, it just kind of clicks with me! I didn't notice any grammar errors! I voted!
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