I like the little twist at the end.. I really didn't expect him to say anything yet..lovely
Wow, great start. Nice hook with Max (no pun intended). A few grammatical errors, but nothing to distracting. Thanks! :)
Great prologue. I don't have time to continue reading this, but I'm definitely adding this to my 'Read Later' list!
Hah, couldn't go on any further, need a break... I been crying like hell--I think I'm gonna run a cold. Man, you're so good.
Aw....he remembered and he talked just for Nicky.....that's so sweet!!.....T.T.....*crys in corner*
Haha yeah I hate the size thing! Heehee.. I get frustrated with it a barely ever make covers any more.
I have seen it! It beats mine to a pulp :L
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