I think the ending is a little flat. But its still good and even though its short its really deep and has a lot of meaning to it, atleast I think it does!
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Short, but intriguing. It makes me think of something that once blossomed but is now crushed by pain and sadness.
@the_hooded_girl It's very beautiful! It would fit in nicely in 'Crow's Feathers'!
@the_hooded_girl I like it! It has an intriguing effect on me! Oh and u r welcome!
It begins in a romantic mood and then it falls into one of loss. Beautifully done. Short and impressive!
A very short poem, but I like it! I am a sucker for short poems. I guess anyone would be after reading all those poems we do for literature! =D
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