This is really interesting! If I can be honest, I think you could have put some more descriptive language in there, but I liked it :)
I love the Uglies series!! Omg. Yes. I just started reading this, it looks REALLY good. So yep.
would read the rest but im stressed for time great story I see more action in the future
The chapter got my attention. c: Especially at the last two sentences. I'll continue. :DD
Wow, this sure is unique. lol, Very well written and cool. ORIGINAL for sure. No changing that, Random but amazingly cool. lol
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