That gave me chills. For some reason I have the feeling that I am not going to get much sleep tonight...
Oh goodness. Even though this was only a page, it really made me creeped out and shocked... i really like this!:'D
first time ive ever commented but this was so good wasn't expecting the end at all :)
I love stories like this! i was biting my nails while reading this! The Suspense! Keep it up :)
u know i was really hoping for a happy ending for jona...but i loved it ether way :D
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