Interesting, compelling, and thought-provoking :) Sorry it took so long for me to comment!
I love the name matilda good first prologue/chapter! cant wait to read on im hooked XD adding to libary and VOTED!
WOW that was the best beginning for a mystery yet! Cool but sadly it wasn't that funny but I'll give you 6 out of ten just because I like it :P
This is great, it just held me in! I couldn't stop reading! Can't wait to read what's next!
I love it, it's a great start :D I can't wait for the next chapter xD keep it up! -voted
Great job so far!! Very interesting, and it shows how much thought you put into this!! You definitely have my vote!! :))
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