good beginning. i definetly keep reading on to find out waht happens next. really good. i don't know what else to say. i like your writing style too.
well the beginning already has me shaking in my imaginary boots(: i'm looking forward to this read!
wow, your details are awesome! I reall like the story line of your story and I saw no mistake! :)
LOve the begining you really get into it.Awesome description.I really want to read more:)
This immediately got my attention as soon as it started, and that doesn't happen very often. Great job.
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