Nice tension with the Perfect Life creators. Murder's a good incentive to keep turning pages. :)
When will you upload the next chapter? I really like your story dear. I hope you'll upload soon as possible. :) God bless!
I like the detective, he's conventional, but the futuristic, science-fiction element really does play with the conventions of both genres.
Ooh this is really cool! Great premise and opening. I can see why it's entered in the Watty Awards.
kinda reminds me of the game in The Hitch Hikers Guide To The Galaxy called better than life
HOw do u put the words from ur title on the cover?? Please comment back
BTW, I like Divney and how ur beginning is very strong and detailed.
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