Me like what I'm reading. Love Dee's crappy attitude & his joke towards the short girl. :P
@Red_Snow Galore is so a word, tell your friends that they can just shut it, lol. It means in abundance, duh!
@trensetta Oh My God i say 'galore' too i say it around my friends and they say its not a word but they can shut their mouths cuz i have prof
Um you keep swtiching from her to I.
You need to either to write from first person or from third person. Other than that, I liked it.
Jesus, I wish we could use Angels like that instead of us Reapers. Our job is so much harder. Can they die? Hmmm...
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