Snatched (On Hold)

15 Part Story 6K Reads 163 Votes
wordgoddess By wordgoddess Updated 2 years ago
Light and darkness. 

One does not know which force is stronger. Selene will come across the truth but, will pay the price. 

Can Selene fight the darkness or will she too be erased from our memories.
Lills_Min Lills_Min 3 years ago
You had a few grammar mistakes here and there, but none were like, extremely terrible. The concept seemed pretty interesting. Great job.
LoveJay LoveJay 3 years ago
@wordgoddess No prob! I'm going to read the rest later, cause I don't have time now! :(
vengefulkarma vengefulkarma 3 years ago
This is really good and I thought it moved at a good pace. There were some grammar mistake though, but they were overlook-able. :)
Voted :D
MsArtemis MsArtemis 3 years ago
The ending was good-it was very last minute and makes the reader want to move on. Good job :)
realityxfantasy realityxfantasy 3 years ago
I thought you did a very good job for the start of your story. This was thought-provoking and suspenseful. You should most definitely continue since you make the reader want to keep reading :)
fantasy343 fantasy343 3 years ago
I love this! I like Rick, he seems cute and sweet lol. I think you should maybe describe the friends a little better and break the diologue into new lines when the person speaks. But besides that, I like it :). It makes you wanna keep reading, which I am! It's going to my library!