You had a few grammar mistakes here and there, but none were like, extremely terrible. The concept seemed pretty interesting. Great job.
@wordgoddess No prob! I'm going to read the rest later, cause I don't have time now! :(
This is really good and I thought it moved at a good pace. There were some grammar mistake though, but they were overlook-able. :)
The ending was good-it was very last minute and makes the reader want to move on. Good job :)
this was great!!! Im usually not a fan of vampire books but this was awesome :) on to the next chapter!
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