Kidnappped (and loving it!) [Slow updates]

26 Part Story 76.4K Reads 975 Votes
PeaceLover248 By PeaceLover248 Updated a year ago
Meet Ocean Calling, a bubbly sixteen-year-old girl who gets suddenly kidnapped by a mysterious Zac Fuentes to help make a plan with his crew to destroy their enemy gang. Sounds scary, no? Not really. With Ocean around, nothing is as scary as expected. Join them on their crazy adventure, you may laugh, cry or twerk, because it's not everyday someone gets kidnapped, and loves it. [PG-13]
fxcksbands fxcksbands 2 years ago
Wow i love this story :) Please read mine its called "Hunted and Hijacked" anyways this is so good i love it :)
dreamit dreamit 3 years ago
Intriguing enough but it seems a little common on wattpad, but the story does allow twists to be incorporated in the future,
northless northless 3 years ago
Woah! That's really captivating. I like how you showed us he suffocated her, instead of saying 'He suffocated me'. Good job :) voted.
ForeverrUnbroken ForeverrUnbroken 3 years ago
Ohh intense! i like it! haha this is really good and i didnt catch any major mistakes either! voted!
Brokenlessthan3 Brokenlessthan3 3 years ago
Few mistakes. I reckon ur blurb shud be longer but im liking it.  *VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVOOTED* This has potentiaol and ur characters are developing ver well. Well written. :))
JayJAnne JayJAnne 3 years ago
Very explanitory. Try to include more details. The "telling" is kinda dry. Try to "show" what's happening, if you get what I'm saying...