Order of the Gears
Imagine a steampunk world in the Victorian era in modern ages. That's where Syl is. Syl, eighteen, has spent her entire life in the Gear Hall as an Engineer, a top ranking job in the world of Varse, or for as long as she can remember. Her last memory was her when she was four years old, being taken by her guardian Marv to the Hall. Beyond that, she has no recollection of anything, her parents, friends, nothing. She only has a small locket of two children to remind her of her past.
One day, after fourteen years, the missing Princess of Thorns is found in the midst of a brutal war between Thorns and Pyro and a spark of hope is to be regained. Syl is given the honor of creating the wedding between Princess Sylvia and Prince Tom of Illicia, the bond that will strengthen the Army and push Thorn into victory. But once Syl arrives at the palace, a series of events will change her life forever...
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Aww it's so sad. I wish I could of heard at least a reaction from the mother... there was nothing, did she even notice?
I love your descriptions. Your writing is really beautiful. You paint clear pictures with your words, and I can see everything ever so clearly :) voted!
Some parts go a little fast, but that's barely noticeable cuz this is written so well!
Great start. It is a very good attention grabber. I will be sure to keep reading. Voted!
Really interesting and fast-paced! Good amount of description in the middle of chaos. I'm interested to find out what happens, so I'll keep reading :)
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