Domestic Combat

1 Part Story 253 Reads 6 Votes
gluttun By gluttun Updated 2 years ago
A couple settles an argument over whose last name their first child should inherit... with fist to fist combat.
strawberrycrayon strawberrycrayon 2 years ago
Quite a unique relationship here... I can't imagine purposefully and lovingly abusing my own boyfriend like that, haha. I enjoyed the banter and the martial arts descriptions, good job writing this both slightly grotesque and undeniably adorable couple!
ManhattanLMilan ManhattanLMilan 2 years ago
Action isn't exactly my thing, but I thought it was cute. :) It was a fun little story to read and you've got good descriptions. The story seems to flow to me. I wonder what their child will turn out like...
PsychedelicPsycho PsychedelicPsycho 2 years ago
haha That's amazing, I really loved it! You write very well XD