Fantastic vocabulary and grammar! I loved this! You did an amazing job with details too :) I will vote :D
I like this story!! Blaze is intriguing...I like him :D!!!! Up tot he next chapter!!!!
I like this one. I like the idea of the outlaws:] just a few little grammer mistakes but I didnt see many but I like:)
There are some grammar mistakes but that can be easily fixed. Nice plot I like where it is going!
Hey nice name! (Its mine lol) And my middle name is Elizabeth, that's awesome! Anywayyys, I liked this, not exactly my cup o' tea, but the writing was good
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