Death Note: L x Reader [LEMON/SMUT]

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Lela By Lela Completed
A re-write of my first lemon from a few years ago. Excuse me If L seems a bit OOC. I haven't watched Death Note in years @_@
@ButterflyPikachu it's not rude to try to help you become better. Grow up please and learn to take constructive criticism.
I was playing Play With Fire by TBM and I kept on nosebleeding reading this. Full of smut, but I enjoyed it! 
Aside from grammar mistakes, I absolutely loved it. My nose is actually bleeding all over my phone now. I'm gonna go clean this up now haha.
My thoughts: BB AND L SWITCHED PERSONALITIES!!!! SOMEONE CALL AN AMBERLAMPS
I found more mistakes but I don't want to spam this story. If you want more help just tell me.
Grammar mistakes such as lack of commas and incorrect paragraph format :3