Death Note: L x Reader [LEMON/SMUT]

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Lela By MsLela92 Completed
A re-write of my first lemon from a few years ago. Excuse me If L seems a bit OOC. I haven't watched Death Note in years @_@
Da nose bleed....GAH! I can't take it!! 
                                    
                                    
                                    ...*continues to read it over and over*
I don't mean to be rude, but it seemed to happen in a, rushed kind of way. Not to be like that but I kind of wished you would have spent more time to ease into it so to speak.
I was playing Play With Fire by TBM and I kept on nosebleeding reading this. Full of smut, but I enjoyed it! 
Aside from grammar mistakes, I absolutely loved it. My nose is actually bleeding all over my phone now. I'm gonna go clean this up now haha.
My thoughts: BB AND L SWITCHED PERSONALITIES!!!! SOMEONE CALL AN AMBERLAMPS
I found more mistakes but I don't want to spam this story. If you want more help just tell me.